Lesson 2 I can rewrite part of the story
Recap on 10 parts of the story.
Choose the first chapter and write using chosen beginning (remembering adverbials practised from last week).
Add detail to parts of the story.
Think, say then write.
After each sentence make sure you re-read and edit where necessary.
Write four boxes of the story.
As they work, ask them to stop occasionally to read parts of what they have written.
Ask them if there is anything they want to change; phrases or sentences?
Use yesterday's plan
Give each chapter a clear start
Use an adverbial phrase